Monday, 28 November 2016

Making Changes to My Poster-Connor Hilton

After looking over my poster with my group and teacher, I have decided to make some slight adjustments to my poster.


Original Poster Draft:



As you can see the title on this poster is quite thin and small which would make it harder to read from a distance. Also some of the letters in the title are harder to see than the others because of the scenery in the image. These are the two things that needed to be changed about my poster.

Original Poster Draft:

As you can see I have changed the size and boldness of the title to make it easier to see from far away. I have also added a white glow around the text to also make it stand out from the scenery. Lastly, I adjusted the spacing to match the thickness of the text.

Making Adjustments to my Poster - Sam Swinson

Making Adjustments to my Poster - Sam Swinson

I have made some adjustments to my short film poster. This is because it is going to be put forward as one of the final short film posters. This meant that I had to make the poster pixel perfect so that when it would be printed it would look like a real short film poster.

How I made the adjustments:

The first thing that I did was to look at the first poster draft that I created and see how it looked on the screen at different distances. Then I made some small adjustments like I changed the size of the text that showed how gave the summary review.

Then I printed the poster to see how it would look. This is because the posters are designed to be printed and sometimes when you print then you can see the finer details and the smaller things that need to be changed about the poster. After this I changed the colour of the title to white and then I made the text thicker to make it stand out more on the page. This was because it didn't stand out when looking at the print version of the poster because it was too thin and when you looked at it from a distance it was hard to see.

Original Poster Draft:



Final Draft:



Title sequence for short film



For our title sequence, we used a shot of our protagonist and friend walking towards the camera. We used this because we wanted the audience to see them together right as the short film began. This was to show their intimacy, it also has relevance as you seer the protagonist happy with his friend and later on in the short film, the audience sees him in a different way without his friend. We spaced the letters of the title apart to symbolise the loneliness of the protagonist within the short film. When filming, we framed the shot to purposely leave space for the title.



Friday, 25 November 2016

The Process of Editing our Short Film - Editing Short Film

The Process of Editing our Short Film - Editing Short Film

Image Editing:-Connor

During the image editing process there were a few shots that we had adjust such as the shots taken on location at the bridge road. For these shots we had to adjust the brightness of some of the shots because the lighting was natural and light and dark in different places. We shot in two different lighting situations which made some shots look darker than the others. So, to fix this we adjusted the brightness of the shots taken in the darker areas to match the brightness of the shots taken in the lighter areas.


There were some shots in the storyboard that ended up being changed or not used at all either due to them not working or being badly filmed. The first shot that we removed was during scene 7, it was a long shot of the protagonist lying on the bed inbetween messages, we had trouble getting this shot to work as the camera wouldn't focus on the protagonist and it was hard to film properly as we were filming in a relatively small room. The shot also seemed like it was fairly pointless and didn't have much purpose other than to create time between messages being sent and received so we didn't have a problem with removing it from the film. Also, there was another shot during scene 8 that wasn't filmed as we may have liked so we had to cut the shot early. The shot was a pan into a tilt from a low angle to a high angle of the protagonist. Most of the shot was fine, however towards the end of the shot the camera wobbled slightly which we didn't notice at the time of filming.


For the majority of the short film we mainly used fade and cross dissolve transitions. We used fade in and out transitions when there was a change of location (change in scene). We did this because it provides a clear stopping point to a scene and a clear start point to the next scene. We used a cross dissolve when time passed in the same location. Using the cross dissolve is a quick transition that is a clear indicator of time passing and doesn't confuse the audience into thinking that the location is changing.


Sound Editing: - Sam

Sound editing is a key part to editing any short film. This is because the sound is half of the information that the audience will receive. The sound editing includes adding foley's, non-diegetic background music and diegetic sound like dialogue.

Dialogue:
While we were filming we made sure to use a sound recorder when there would be any dialogue in the shot. We only had 3 shots that had dialogue in them which meant we didn't have to record a lot of dialogue. This meant that editing the dialogue together was very easy because all we had to do was line up the sound recorder sound with the moving image from the camera and because we only had to do this 3 times is was very quick. Then we had to adjust the volume of the dialogue so that it was loud enough to hear, but, not too loud that it would deafen the audience.

Foley:
We recorded a few foley sounds with the sound recorder while we were shooting. These included:

  • Mouse clicking sound
  • Footstep sound
  • Ball hitting wall sound
  • Message ping sound
Recording the sounds separately gives a lot more control over the sound when we were in the editing phase. This meant that we could increase the sound of the foley if we felt it was too quiet without increasing the volume of the on board camera. Having a recorded foley for the footsteps was very useful when it came to the sound editing of the woods scene where the protagonists friend disappears. This was because we were able to fade the footsteps sound in so that it could just about be heard. 


Non-diegetic Background Music:
The non-diegetic background music is a key part of any moving image production because it can help convey emotion and atmosphere to the audience. It can be very hard to find the correct background music that would enhance the effect that the moving image is trying to having on the audience without it being over the top. This is why we spent a lot of time picking the correct background music for certain scenes. What we found when we were looking for the music is that it is very hard to find happy background music that does't ruin the mood of the piece. For this reason in most of the happy parts of the short film we don't have any background music because we couldn't find any that would fit properly. This means that there is only background music for some of the sad parts of the short film to help the audience sympathise with the protagonist and his loneliness.

Once we had selected the background music that we were going to use we then had to put them into the short film. When doing this we were very conscious that we didn't over use the background music because it would make it seem like a music video instead of a short film. Therefore, we didn't use a lot of the background music, however, we used enough to enhance the feel of the particular scenes.

Then we adjusted the levels of the background music so that it wasn't too loud and we added fades in and out to make the music seem more seamless.


The group as we were looking for non-diegetic background music



Wipe Transition: - Connor

We originally had the idea of having a slow wipe transition during scene 1 when the two characters are walking home through the woods. The transition was going to be used on a long shot from the side of the two characters. The idea was to have a wipe transition in the direction that the two characters were walking and the edge of the frame would follow the characters and the next shot would begin behind the other.
 

As you can see from the video above, the transition ended up not really work well. The transition is distracting and confusing as you end up seeing the characters on screen twice. The transition mainly didn't work because it was distracting which is not the intended effect of a transition, a transition should be a subtle effect that has an effective impact.


Fade Away Transition: - Sam

The fade away transition is a key part of our short film. This is where the protagonist's mind plays a trick on him because he sees his dead friend. Then the audience see his dead friend disappear and then the protagonist turns round to look at his dead friend, but, he is not there.


Before we went out on the actual shoot we practised creating this shot in the corridor of the college. Then we took the footage we filmed and made one of the characters disappear. This meant that when it came to the actual shoot we knew what to do and how to film it.


How we edited it together:
  1. This is the shot has only the protagonist in it and this is going to be used to make the friend disappear. We used the crop tool to crop half of this shot so that the protagonist could not be seen in the shot.
  2. A cross dissolve is used to fade between the shot with the friend in and and the shot without the friend in it so that there is a fade away effect.
  3. The shot below this on the timeline is the shot that has both the protagonist and the friend in it.
  4. This is the result after the friend has faded away.
When filming this shot we made sure not to make the camera at all because even a slight changing in camera angle or position and then the shot would be ruined and we would have to go back and re-shoot the shot. So when filming both of the shots that were needed to create the fade away effects we made sure to only touch the start and stop recording button and then just leave the camera alone.

However, we did have an issue that we had to overcome when we were editing this shot. The issue was because the two shots were lit differently because we were using natural lighting. This meant that there was a massive line down the middle of the screen where the two differently lit shots met. To overcome this issue we used the brightness and contrast filter that is in Final Cut Pro. Then we made the shot darker so that it would match the shot underneath it to give a convincing fade away effect. We ended up having to decrease the brightness to 0.71 to make the shot look correct and to make it so that there was no line down the middle of the screen.

Here is how the scene looks now that we have finished editing it and after we created the fade away effect:
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The group as we were editing




Tuesday, 22 November 2016

Jakes poster draft ACTUAL POSTER


American honey - poster research


American Honey


American honey is about a teenage girl who decides to join a magazine sales crew and starts ;partying, breaking the law, young love and travelling with a group of other youths. 





MRANG Concepts

- Audience
- Genre
- Representation


Audience

The Audience this would appeal to is most probably the young adult age group. This is because its possibly something they would want to do and therefore can relate to the characters. This could also appeal to a middle aged audience. This is because it could remind them of their youth and could be nostalgic making them want to watch it. 


Genre

The genre of this could be seen due to the clear image of what we assume is the protagonist. This could be seen as social realism as it has a real character possibly looking for a ride to hitchhike. It could also be seen as a drama as it has real characters going though unexpected experiences in America.

Representation

From the underlying theme of America with red, white and blue, we can assume it is set or the protagonist is possibly American. From the image of the protagonist, we can see that she has tattoos. This could suggest her youth or being 'different from the crowd.' From how the stars are falling onto the protagonist, it could connote that she wants the American lifestyle or thinks she will find her way there. As there is nothing around her and all we can see is the sky, it connotes freedom linking into the theme of the American lifestyle.

Structure

The orientation of this film poster is portrait. This is to the full image of the protagonist in focus for the audience to see. With this, we see the Title at the top surrounded by big stars such as Shia Labeouf. This is a common convention when films have big stars in as fans of the actor will be more likely to go watch it and, may make people regard the film as better as it has bigger stars.




































Monday, 21 November 2016

Couple in a hole - poster research




Couple in a hole


Couple in a hole is a short film about a middle aged couple from Scotland who live in a man made cave in France. After their son dies, the mother becomes depressed. After a while, her condition deteriorates and the farther makes his last stand and tries to repair their life.




 MRANG Concepts

- Representation
- Genre
- Narrative 



Representation

This short film poster appears to be made from snapshots from the film. This is to give insight into what is happening and who the characters are. From this, we see that the characters appear to be poor or possibly unemployed. This is because they have little to no clothing when we see it and the pail white skin suggesting they are not healthy. From the tree, Combined with the tree, we can infer that they possibly life in forest, or they are all one large family, the tree symbolising the family tree.


Genre

The Genre of this short film is portrayed well through the poster. First, from how the characters are shown arguing and mid reaction, it gives the impression that it is social realism as their is conflict between the characters. It could be argued as a drama for the same reasons. However, it may be over exaggerated for entertainment purposes. This is also because with the dead tree and pale white skins of the characters, it could symbolise death therefore linking in to the drama genre.


Narrative

At the top of the tree in the poster, we can see the same women multiple times. This could be showing how she changes through the story. We can assume this is the protagonist as she appears multiple times bringing the attention of the audience to her wherever they look. From how the tree appears to be holding up all the characters with a larger women in the middle, it could connote that they are her memories.


Structure 

This poster is in landscape. This is so that we can get a full view of the image of the tree with the characters in it. It also leaves space for the producers to put extra information in such as reviews, billing blocks, awards and much more which is a common convention for posters.