-Jump cuts are effective as they speed the walking along. -Good use of Photoshop for the BBC NEWS article. -Really represents the meaning of being alone. -The editing is effective when he disappears when he walks past.
-You can see the change of name on the close up of the Facebook message. -Use of props is strange as the character changed phone. -Facial expressions seem a bit forced. -Could shorten the moment of him walking alone as you do get the message, is quite long.
-good soundtrack but would be better if they made it louder -the ending was good but the build up took a long time -good, realistic settings -there was a good shock -the POV shots made the character more relatable -the narrative was clear -emphasise ending death more
-Good facial expression. -Lots of shot variety. -Good facial expression. -Good use of lighting. -Phone shot maybe a bit too long. -Last shot was maybe longer than it needed to be.
-Jump cuts are effective as they speed the walking along.
ReplyDelete-Good use of Photoshop for the BBC NEWS article.
-Really represents the meaning of being alone.
-The editing is effective when he disappears when he walks past.
-You can see the change of name on the close up of the Facebook message.
-Use of props is strange as the character changed phone.
-Facial expressions seem a bit forced.
-Could shorten the moment of him walking alone as you do get the message, is quite long.
-good soundtrack but would be better if they made it louder
ReplyDelete-the ending was good but the build up took a long time
-good, realistic settings
-there was a good shock
-the POV shots made the character more relatable
-the narrative was clear
-emphasise ending death more
-Good facial expression.
ReplyDelete-Lots of shot variety.
-Good facial expression.
-Good use of lighting.
-Phone shot maybe a bit too long.
-Last shot was maybe longer than it needed to be.
-Great variety of shot distances
ReplyDelete-Appropriate settings and other Mise En Scene
-Good use of soundtracks in order to complement the tone of the film
-Ending could be even more shocking if adding an impact sound effect